HƯỚNG DẪN LÀM BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 1 NGÀY 04/06/2024

Introduction and overview

• Introduction: Paraphrase the line graph’s subject
• Overview: Comment on the most noticeable features for the line graph:
  • By 2025, the figures for education and roads will have decreased, and the figure for healthcare will have increased  
  • By 2025, healthcare spending is predicted to be highest among all

Body 1:  2000-2015

• Spending with the highest figure: Education (5%)
• Spending with lower figures: Health care and roads & railways (4.3%)
• Education spending rose to a peak (7%) then fell (6%)
• Health spending grew steadily (6%)
• Roads & railways spending fell to a low (3.5%) then rose to a peak (nearly 5%)

Body 2: From 2015 onwards

• Education spending fell steadily
• Roads & railways spending fell steadily
• Health spending grew steadily
• Expected figures in 2025: 4.2% (education), 3.9% (roads & railways), 7% (health)
• Health spending will be the highest in 2025

The line graph illustrates a country’s government spending on health, education and roads and railroads as a portion of its GDP from 2000 until now and provides projections for 2025. It is clear that by 2025, the scale of healthcare expenditure in proportion to the GDP will have grown, while the figures for education and road infrastructure will have shrunk. Additionally, healthcare spending is predicted to be the most significant item.

In 2000, education spending started as the highest, with 5%, whereas the data of health and transport infrastructure were both around 4.3%. The figure for education then rose to a high of 7.0% in 2010, after which it declined to 6% in 2015. Health outlay, meanwhile, grew steadily in scale to approximately 6% in 2015, catching up to that of education. Roads and railroads expenditure first dipped to an all-time low of 3.5% in 2005 before reaching its peak in 2015, with nearly 5%.

After 2015, all figures witnessed consistent trajectories. While health spending continued to rise, overtaking that of education in the process, both the figures for education and road infrastructure fell. It is projected that healthcare expenditure will have been slightly over 7% of this country’s GDP, becoming the largest figure by 2025. Outlays on education, along with on roads and railways, meanwhile, are expected to drop to 4.2% and 3.9%, respectively.